The Cheshire Cat

"Take a couple Advil and crawl burrow under my covers with a hot water bottle. If it's not a headache I'll read a book, otherwise I can't look at anything." ...

Sounds like a dark, brooding story, with possible abuse, bullying and/or other painfull experiances. I probably wouldn't pick it up unless I was in a brooding type of mood. Blithe ...

A mastermind detective, dark and mysterious, alike in many ways to the figures on old cop shows. Always ready with a witty remark, at times he might resort to somewhat ...

Howdy there Peanut! :D Well, here I am to review your story, like you asked. Let me start off by saying how awesome it is X3. You do a great ...

I love what you have so far. The topic of Death/Dying/or the Grim Reaper is my favorite to read or write. This prologue was expecially juicy. I saw a few ...

Excellent job! You played with the reader's emotions well and effectively painted a picture of a battle scene. I have a few little grammer mistakes however... It was the last ...

NNnerght I went through so much trouble with this chapter. -__- My computer died with I was nearly done and I hadn't saved so I was terribly afaid I had ...

Nooooo!! Sage! DX You're doing a good job of making this play really good, yet really sad. I bet you're going to get some tears out of your audience if ...

Aww poor Mute. Blaine is a jerk. He's a great 'love-to-hate' character. I think that Prate is going to save the day; bust them all out somehow. That's my prediction... ...

Another great chapter here! :) I'm loving the characters, though I still picture Mute as an man. XD I just have one bit of critique... SAGE: (chuckles) I don’t know ...

I'm in love with Mute I think. XD I feel so sad; I just wanna give him a huge hug. Again, this was an amazing idea, and you do an ...

I really love this so far. I love the interaction between Sage and Mute. Mute's fear every time he thought Sage was gone really touched me. I know I'd be ...

Wow, I really enjoyed this! :) It was amazing for a first try, and very entertaining as well. I would have prefered a better ending - it was a little ...

Another project I am considering doing after I finish "Blithe Bereavement". It's a little boring because this is just the prologue, but please enjoy anyway. :) Theme song for this ...

This was...really funny. XD I loved it. Your character is great, and the story is interesting. You draw the audience in without giving too much away, which is great. I ...